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bluesbaby74 |
Share Your Original Songs HERE |
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at the request of some members, i'm adding this thread to sticky to the top. if you would like to share your ORIGINAL song lyrics or links to your song clips and get feedback, please post them here.
post at your own risk, this IS the internet afterall |
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freddogg5 |
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thanks sookie! that's pretty much what this forum has become. it will be good to have a place to do it in one thread as opposed to 50!
Sarah
"If you fake the funk, your nose will grow"-George Clinton and the P-Funk Mothership Connection "You son of a bitch, I'm right behind you! Turn around ask me for heffer with cheese, yo. Why you feel you gotta make me feel inferior because I'm on the grill, b."-Half Baked |
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Jadedcloud |
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All i have to say is, thank you!
Sabrina
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freddogg5 |
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ok, so i'm gonna start. this isn't really a song just yet, its just lyrics, well a poem. tell me what you think. i'm trying to get a tune in my head for it. sorry its kind of long!
UNDERSTANDING my initial reaction when you went away was to cry and cry each day until i was able to join you some way off in the clouds far far away but then a flush of anger arose from fingertips and toes and i hated the world for taking you and cursed the sky that held you in its prison of blues and grays but as my fists were raised in rage i realized the sky was not to blame and began to search for an answer as to why this hex was placed upon your name for the fates to keep you at a permanent age as the expanse of space above me cleared and prisms of light were released and seared around me, undestanding took control and told me no prison is what took hold of you the little voice that invaded my head let me know you weren't really dead but part of the clouds i cursed so vehemently looking down and watching out permanently at home and happy knowing all was ok eased my mind in a way and almost 3 years to the day i can finally smile and say that you are better off this way i cherish every moment that we had and even though i am sad you are home and you are glad and one day not too far from now we will be together again and smile at the old days Sarah
"Don't worry about a thing, 'Cause every little thing gonna be all right. Singin': "Don't worry about a thing, 'Cause every little thing gonna be all right!" -Bob Marley "You son of a bitch, I'm right behind you! Turn around ask me for heffer with cheese, yo. Why you feel you gotta make me feel inferior because I'm on the grill, b."-Half Baked |
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Matt3K3 |
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Ohh, Sarah, that's good. Now I understand why you were looking for that poetry site
--Matt
![]() Listen to YC's new single, Ocean Avenue Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up These are the best days of our lives... Sneak out the window, darling We'll live like outlaws honey We'll never look back... Until the day I die, I'll spill my heart for you All things happen for a reason But time will tie together all that is meant to be Hornballs unite! |
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MayerCK |
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Hey everyone, I know I rarely post here but I lurk like crazy so I'll probably catch a lot of shit for this but anyways.....My friend PJ has posted some songs and they're damn tasty so I think you should give them a listening. Take Care and Thank You.
www.dmbboards.com/temp/pj_hall_give.mp3 www.dmbboards.com/temp/pj...I%20am.mp3 --Carson--
AIM-MayerDay77 E-mail: TheMakerDMB@aol.com |
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D2T0803 |
Check out San Diego band Second Thought | ||
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Check out my band Second Thought
www.purevolume.com/secondthought If you like the 3 songs on there go to: www.secondthought1.com to download the rest of the 6 song cd for FREE!! Thanks. |
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Lgallagher |
Five Man Trio | ||
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hey everyone...what a great thread. So, I'd like to add to the mix. This is a band i'm in from Buffalo, NY called Five Man Trio. I do a lot of solo work too (guitar, harmonica and vocals), but this is from our 4 song demo. Send some feedback my way and I'd be much obliged. mrliamgallagher2000@yahoo.com
www.joechilds.net/5mantri...k%2002.mp3 smell ya later. liam |
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noangel86 |
my song | ||
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This is a little something I wrote called:
two thousand years theres a face on the sun, its telling stories of pirates & fairies time, is nothing but time thats what it repeats, once and again it has being all over the world, for the last two thousand years two thousand years of days, nights, and simple lives theres a smile upon her face, the one that God put on her love, is nothing but love thats what she repeats, once and again she grabs a guitar and in a second, she writes a rock n roll tune two thousand years of lust and lovely siluettes in the night theres a famous rock star inside of that 40-year-old little boy rock, is nothing but rock thats what he repeats, once and again hes not old, hes just older; hes not wise, hes just wiser two thousand miles of life, music and singing the blues theres a uninspired writer, writing about theorems and Shakespeare to be, or not to be thats what he repeats, once and again a silly line, a poetic triumph, an epic story, a brave princess two thousand miles of rhymes, smiles and writing dead lines theres a crying lonely lady, inside the comedy house of joy laughs, only sad laughs thats what she repeats, once and again a comic phrase, a rapid pace, all inside the mix with stupid grace two thousand hours and none has done so much for her theres a lonely child with the biggest smile Ive ever seeing tears are useless, they are thats what he repeats, once and again he starts laughing so hard, he starts to dance around the moon tow thousand hours and more of this silliness and such theres an unknown man, who is much more than just a man so long, it has being so long thats what he repeats, once and again he stares in disbelieve at the shocked couple across the street two thousand years and three more had gone by him, by us theres a politic with a trustful look, a very good vibe your call, its your call thats what he repeats, once and again he smiles with love in his eyes, and a dream inside his heart two thousand years and two thousand more are on the way two thousand years and two thousand more are on the way two thousand years, two thousand names, two thousand stories, two thousand years, two thousand of each of us, two thousand faces two thousand years and two thousand more are on the way pls be honest, and if it's in God's will you'll hear from me... ~7SEVEN7~
MERRY XMAS!!! & A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! 2004!!!! AND REMEMBER WHAT GOES AROUND COMES AROUND! PEACE & LOVE! |
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Green Ceaser |
Your Poems and songs on Here | ||
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I wish I could write such poetry. I have some songs of my own, but I would have many more if I could write like that! (referring to the two poems here)Would either of you mind if I put it to words, and maybe sent it to you?
Dan |
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freddogg5 |
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sure go ahead. and the poem below mine, very good!
Sarah
"Don't worry about a thing, 'Cause every little thing gonna be all right. Singin': "Don't worry about a thing, 'Cause every little thing gonna be all right!" -Bob Marley "You son of a bitch, I'm right behind you! Turn around ask me for heffer with cheese, yo. Why you feel you gotta make me feel inferior because I'm on the grill, b."-Half Baked |
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